Peer Review

 Nathan Honhart

I was excited but a little nervous about my feedback. Most of my classmates loved my film, but we made a lot of mistakes that i am excited to fix. My classmates and teacher gave me some great feedback on my film. First, our classmates loved our sound effects and transitions. On my new film, I will be incorporating many of those same transitions and sound effects into my film. However, some of my classmates made it clear that our camera was slightly shaky in some of our scenes. To avoid this, we will be extra careful in our new film to not shake our camera, and to make sure that it is steady and does not shake. In part of our dialogue, we mentioned getting food and drinks, but never had any food and drinks in our movie. We decided to cut this out because it did not fit our horror genre, and it allowed us to save time, to add more scary scenes in our film. We also filmed on different days, so our clothes did not match in each scene. To solve this problem, we shot our new film in one day, to make sure we had the same outfit on the whole time. Our last bit of feedback we got is that we needed to make our film scarier. By cutting out the food and drink scene, we were able to add a scarier scene into our film, to better fit the horror genre. I believe that our new film, is a huge upgrade from out old film, and it fits the horror genre much better than our last film.